New original on a Ritt

[Chris Grotewohl]

Howdy Folks,

One I made up, still working on it and is on a new to me Rittenberry guitar. Called Ritt n' Berries.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YiWMfgrW ... e=youtu.be

Thanks, Chris

[Chris Grotewohl]

Hey Folks,

I guess I posted this to get some feedback on the tune, playing etc... or just scratch it. I'm still a newbie really, but like to be original also, and most importantly, always welcome any members advice or criticism.

Thanks again, Chris

[Ed Heins]

OK I'm a real newbie as well, and I think it's an interesting piece, what I can hear. For some reason, whether it's my speakers or your recording I can't hear what's going on when you move up to some of the higher pitched parts. It seems to go a bit muddy up there when you seem to transition out of a major into a diminished sounding chord but I'm playing this on a laptop in China, so I suspect my setup may have something to do with that. At any rate for us newbies, I think it's important to get some reinforcement so keep on doin it dude . I just added some steel to a Mandarin Language country song that I'm working up. Some local folks have decided to "Improve" my phrasing of the lyrics so I'm waiting to see what the rewrite looks like I find I like critique better than criticism