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Topic: Can I get an opinion from a steel player? :eek: |
Terry Wendt
From: Nashville, TN, USA
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Tony Prior
From: Charlotte NC
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Posted 29 Mar 2002 2:26 am
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Hi Terry nice tune and fine playing, my only comment would be that the mix level for the track compared to the vocal seems out of whack as the vocal appears to be significantly out in front of the track. Maybe it's just the way the MP3 downloaded.
Good luck, I hope to hear you on the radio !
TP
I may have understood your post to mean "let it go as it is" without a re-mix, that would be the only point of my reply. It's a fine tune .[This message was edited by Tony Prior on 29 March 2002 at 11:18 AM.] |
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Jeff Lampert
From: queens, new york city
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Posted 29 Mar 2002 8:29 am
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I don't see the point of you asking us what we think. First of all, the steel guitar community is hardly representative of the general public who would be buying your record. We tend to be more conservative and traditional in our music choices. You've seen how many long for music from the 50's, 60's, and 70's. We also tend to favor the steel guitar over everything, especially the singers whom we tend to criticize alot, even though the singer sells the record. And as a group, we are also older than the buying public. So using us as a gauge doesn't make sense to me. And second, you never know what will make it or what won't. It's a thousand to one chance anyway, but it's a chance you oughta take. Why care what we think? If you gotta have some opinions, get hold of a couple of producers who have some credentials. I'd trust their opinions more. That's how I see it. [This message was edited by Jeff Lampert on 29 March 2002 at 08:36 AM.] |
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Donny Hinson
From: Glen Burnie, Md. U.S.A.
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Posted 29 Mar 2002 9:07 am
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Terry, everyone here will tell you that I'm notoriously frank, honest, and opinionated, and prefer classic styles as opposed to more contemporary styles. Nevertheless, I consider what you've done equal to, or better than, most of the stuff I hear on the radio. The steel's got a definite "Paul Franklin tone", and the tune has a "catchy" rhythm that I haven't heard in awhile. Both of those are in your favor. The lyrics are simplistic, but with today's audiences, they're quite adequate. I see nothing major wrong, and a professional remix would probably make it quite "sellable" (if the singer has the requisite visual appeal that seems so necessary in today's market).
I wish you luck, and I'd be proud if I had done it myself!
p.s. I'd like to hear a slow version of the same song...I think it would be equally as good, but probably just not as "commercial". |
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Johan Jansen
From: Europe
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Posted 29 Mar 2002 9:11 am
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Terry,
you have a nice touch, tone and execution on this song.I'm looking forward to the final recording!
JJ |
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Gerald Menke
From: Stormville NY, USA
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Posted 29 Mar 2002 9:28 am
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Hey Terry,
First let me say I admire your gutsiness, putting your work up for all to check out this way. I think without a doubt your playing is far and away the best thing about the track; really cool tone, strong thematic ideas; would love to have heard some more fills in "the holes" in the verses, but maybe that's a sign I overplay... I wasn't wild about the guitar sound or the verb on the vocal, but hey you sound GREAT and I wish you lots of luck. Nicely done. |
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Bob Carlson
From: Surprise AZ.
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Posted 29 Mar 2002 12:15 pm
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Terry...I'd forget the steel, play the Strat to cut down on band costs. Your voice has a new fresh sound and like Donny said, it you can charm the females, go for it as a singer. The steel playing was nice and differant than we hear everyday so it might just fit todays market.
Bob. |
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Bill Llewellyn
From: San Jose, CA
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Posted 29 Mar 2002 8:16 pm
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Nice steel work, Terry. It really stands out in the song.
Y'know, I've been seeing assorted folks (yours truly included) posting demo music here recently. Maybe b0b could put up a section for just this purpose....? I'll jump off to Feedback & Testing and propose it.
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Dave Burr
From: League City, TX
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Posted 30 Mar 2002 8:06 am
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Terry, I was so impressed by the steel playing on your demo that I did a yahoo search on your name... Here is one of the things I found: http://www.shaniafanclub.com/multimedia/audio/wildflower.wma
Just out of curiousity, what year was the "Wildflower" demo done. Wonderful steel playing on it!
Respectfully,
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Dave Burr
Remington Sustainmaster SD-10 3x4
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erik
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Posted 30 Mar 2002 9:32 am
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Terry, i'm not a steel player but i'd like to comment on the song. I like it a lot. It has a 70s kind of feel. But sounds fresh for today. Interestingly your voice reminds me of myself, same with the guitar solo. I love the Srat tone. Can you tell me what Strat you are using?
Technically, i also hear the mix is uneven. But keep the voice out front just raise the levels of the steel, drums, and bass a tad. I am also experiencing hiccups, wow and flutter. I suspect i have a corrupt download. The steel sounds great with the delay on there. Nice choice tones. Great hook and melody. IMO, this is what we need more of in music... QUIET! Enough with the overblown productions, give the tune a chance to breath. Nice work Terry. |
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Terry Wendt
From: Nashville, TN, USA
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Posted 30 Mar 2002 7:55 pm
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Thanks Tony... You told me exactly what I was asking. As Is. I have no way of doing any "real mixing" on this track. Thanks for the reply! If you can tune into KEEY 102 in MN/St.P radio you just might hear it
Thanks again,
Terry
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and appearing regularly...
Jimmy Crawford/Russ Hicks... and Buddy Emmons on Bass! aLotOfSpace.com
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Terry Wendt
From: Nashville, TN, USA
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Posted 30 Mar 2002 9:22 pm
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Thank for all of the responses everyone! I really appreciate all of the compliments and critique. So as to clear up any misunderstandings about the post originally, I put this track up here for critique due to the fact that I have a chance to "TEST" this track. It doesn't mean a whole lot in the overall picture, but can help get the balls rolling. I am the writer on the song. I also produced this demo and played the steel track after everything else had been recorded. The steel track was originally only meant as a guide... the song was never finished... dah da dah dah... so, now this somewhat powerful MD comes along and says he would like to test it... it's fine. I thought I'd inquire here too. The day I think my opinion (or anyone elses for that matter) doesn't make a difference anymore is the day I stop believing in God and life and the rest of this perception in which we live.
The Wildflower cut with Shania was in 1993. I produced the arrangement and as bandleader took it upon myself to record the rehearsals. That was one from our first show rehearsal.
I have been asked to post some other material up here from some fella's and decided to add links for anyone who wishes to hear final versions of something here: #1 #2 #3 #4 #5 1993wShania.mp3 I hope to hear from you all again sometime! Thanks again to everyone for your opinions
Terry
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[This message was edited by Terry Wendt on 30 March 2002 at 10:34 PM.] [This message was edited by Terry Wendt on 30 March 2002 at 10:37 PM.] [This message was edited by Terry Wendt on 30 March 2002 at 10:43 PM.] |
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Gil Berry
From: Westminster, CA, USA
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Posted 31 Mar 2002 12:23 am
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I liked it. Commercial? I don't know...who does, anyway. But I admire your steel playing, and the vocal is fine. I think the singer (you, too?) would sound better if the song were about a tone and a half lower. Not that it wasn't on key...just would have a more resonant sound. I agree that it might be a better tune if at a slightly slower tempo. And professional mixing would no doubt enhance the job. Just my opinion...(and who am I anyway?)...Great job. I would be proud if it were me. |
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Terry Wendt
From: Nashville, TN, USA
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Posted 31 Mar 2002 8:34 pm
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quote: From: Tom Diemer
To: tkwendt@theearlydays.com
Sent: Friday, March 29, 2002 8:19 PM
Subject: Slam the steel
Terry, I love it!
Great song, and great touch.
Did you play the guitar too? Love the tone.
You should go for it. Very catchy tune, and great playing. Something that might easily sell to this generation.
Good luck on it - hope to see you on the charts!
Tom
I haven't ever posted a quote before tkw[This message was edited by Terry Wendt on 31 March 2002 at 08:35 PM.] |
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Terry Wendt
From: Nashville, TN, USA
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Posted 1 Apr 2002 8:47 pm
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quote: ----- Original Message -----
From: Out West Country
To: theearlydays@hotmail.com
Sent: Friday, March 29, 2002 1:48 PM
Subject: Re: song
you have at er terry i love it and i played it for my wife and she loveed it too
if you want to post what i said it's the truth go for it
thanks
wayne brown
c/o out west pac-seats
Thanks for the encouragement Wayne! God Bless |
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Wayne Brown
From: Bassano, Alberta, Canada
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Posted 4 Apr 2002 4:52 pm
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 [This message was edited by Wayne Brown on 05 April 2002 at 03:41 PM.] |
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Wayne Brown
From: Bassano, Alberta, Canada
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Posted 4 Apr 2002 6:50 pm
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 [This message was edited by Wayne Brown on 05 April 2002 at 03:42 PM.] |
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Wayne Brown
From: Bassano, Alberta, Canada
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Posted 5 Apr 2002 3:40 pm
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thanks terry i'm on the forum now
wayne brown
c/o out west pac-seats
carter sd-10 nashville 1000 |
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Terry Wendt
From: Nashville, TN, USA
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Posted 5 Apr 2002 4:37 pm
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Have you a Website wayne? |
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Wayne Brown
From: Bassano, Alberta, Canada
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Posted 5 Apr 2002 5:59 pm
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sure do i have a thread up in buy and sell and also my web addy is www.outwestpacseat.ca thanks
wayne brown
c/o out west pac-seats
carter sd-10 nashville 1000 |
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Terry Wendt
From: Nashville, TN, USA
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Posted 5 Apr 2002 6:38 pm
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You should put that on your profile - I like it and its related to steel!
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Wayne Brown
From: Bassano, Alberta, Canada
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Posted 5 Apr 2002 7:11 pm
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done thanks  |
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